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The Madwoman’s Outlining Technique

The Madwoman’s Outlining Technique

Since my WIP, Illuminate, is also the thesis project for my graduate program, I don’t have as much time as I’m used to for fiddling around and rewriting stuff.

The logical response? Go absolutely crazy.

Step 1: Make Character Arcs for Everyone.

The Interwebs contain lots of great information about character arcs, so in brief: In the course of a story, characters will respond to conflict on an external and internal level, and by the conclusion characters will undergo some sort of change. This creates story arcs.

Every book has at least one major arc. I personally like Doug Tennapel’s advice to split stories into three acts, each with their own arc.

Here’s how I did it.

Write one sentence summaries for each character for each act.

I took my four major characters and wrote out a one line summary of what they would be learning/going through in each act. This helped me have a quick reference to the change they’d undergo in the course of the book.

Example:
Elizabeth Bennet
Act 1: She indulges in prejudice to come across as more witty.
Act 2: She learns that prejudice can cloud judgment, with bad consequences.
Act 3: She gives up her prejudices.

Write full character conflict sheets.

Disclaimer: My friend and classmate, Annie, passed this on to me. She got the idea from a blog entry but neither of us can find it. I’d be happy to edit this and give credit if anyone recognizes the material.

Next, I took six of the major/minor characters and filled out the following table with their information.

Character Name:
External Conflict Internal Conflict
Inciting Incident Inciting Motivation
Escalating Troubles Pressure Mounts
Resting Point Hope Restored
Major Crisis Hope Destroyed
The Black Moment All is Lost
Turnaround Courage Emerges
Climax Courage Displayed
Denouement Courage Confirmed

This helped me see which characters weren’t growing and where there were opportunities to up the stakes. One character’s arc was literally “she gets sick, then sicker, then even more sick.” I didn’t realize that horrible arc was happening till I had to write it down. Needless to say, that’s been revised, and the result is much stronger.

Turn your sheets into a timeline.

One thing about doing these sheets for multiple characters is that not all your characters’ arcs will start at the same part. My antagonist’s arc begins well before the beginning of the book, for instance.

By creating a timeline you can have an easy way to see what’s happening when to who. I choose to color code mine to help me easily see what was going on.

Sample:

arctimline

Step 2: Write Out Arc Outlines.

I used sticky notes to mark the different acts on my timeline. Then, in my journal, I wrote out each step along the way in each act and graphed each act on the accompanying page. I added extra scenes to an “other” category under my lists.

Sample:

arcgraph

Step 3: Write Out a Complete Outline.

When I had all my individual arc outlines, I decide to take the plunge and make a big outline graph in my large journal. I copied down the most important information and used sloping lines to show how each step affected the tension of the story. (It’s debatable if my lines makes any sense.) Then I highlighted the different acts.

Sample:

Full outline

And voila! I now am the proud owner of an insanely organized series of plots, outlines, and character arcs.

(You can take it a step further and mark out where chapter breaks will be. I’m considering it, but I think I might live on the wild side and actually decide on breaks as I go.)

Do you have your own crazy outlining methods? Share below!

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Alyssa

Alyssa was born in small town Milton, Florida, but life as a roving military kid soon mellowed her (unintelligibly strong) Southern accent. Wanderlust is in her blood, and she’s always waiting for the wind to change. Stories remain her constant. Alyssa received her bachelor’s in English/Creative Writing from Berry College and her master's in Creative Writing for Young People from Bath Spa University. Alyssa is represented by Amber Caraveo at Skylark Literary. Her debut The Eleventh Trade – "a powerful story of love, loss, friendship and hope, centered around Sami, a young refugee from Afghanistan now building a new life with his grandfather in Boston" – will be published Fall 2018 by Macmillan (U.S.) and HotKey (U.K.).

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  3. This was so fascinating and extremely helpful when writing my characters and their stories. Thanks times a million.

  4. This is an AWESOME technique, and definitely one I haven’t seen before! I’m getting ready to plan a novella for the next Camp NaNoWriMo, and I can’t wait to give this method a try. Thanks so much for sharing it!

  5. What a wonderful post-I love it. I am a very visual person, so this suits me perfectly.

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