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The Massive Story Doctor Giveaway Winners

The Massive Story Doctor Giveaway: WINNERS!

August 8, 2016 Posted by Alyssa Writing Tips

The blog’s first giveaway has ended! Thank you everyone who entered – there was a great turnout and I’m excited for more giveaways in the future!

I’m gonna keep this short and sweet, because 1) It’s Deadline Month and 2) We all know why you’re really here.

The Prizes Were…

1 Month of Writing Mentorship:

I’ll reach out to you via email and get to know a bit about your writing project and your goals for the month we’ll be working together. From there, my job is to hold you accountable to your targets with regular check-ins, help guide you through any hitches (whether you’re unsure of a plot move or unsure how to avoid “infodumping”), and give you a short critique. Basically I’m there to be your sounding board and give you some quality writing companionship!

Story Consultations + 10 Page Critique:

Story consultations will be 30 minute Skype calls between you, me, and (schedules allowing) my super-qualified partner in writing crime, Annie. During this session, you can talk about whatever you want, from publishing advice to plot to genre or writing tone… Whatever! We’ll give you feedback based off our expertise (both of us have our master’s in writing subjects and are signed with agents) and help you on your way. We’re also happy to give you a 10 page critique (before or after the call – your choice!).

(Note: If Skype doesn’t work for you for some reason, we can talk alternate ways to do this.)

Other Critiques:

Pretty straightforward. You’ll get detailed feedback from me on your excerpt of choice, with comments throughout your submission and then an overall analysis at the end. I always try to recommend solutions for any problem I pick up, so that you’ll be equipped and encouraged to move forward.

4 Short Critiques (Pitches/Blurbs, First Page, Synopsis or Query)

This can be any combination of the above list, but I do ask you keep the entire submission to less than five pages (double spaced). If you only submit one or two pages, I’d be happy to go over it with you through two or three drafts!

Sketches by Laura Hollingsworth:

Laura Hollingsworth, my crazy talented sister, will draw the character of your choice in a sketchy style. (You can check out her commission guidelines here if you want more info.)

The Winners Are…

1 Month Writing Mentorship: @JessWGoodwin

Story Consultations + 10 Page Critique: Charis E.

Story Consultations + 10 Page Critique: @G_Grivee

Story Consultations + 10 Page Critique: @cyannebliss

Story Consultations + 10 Page Critique: @OpalChetah

Critiques (15 pages) + Character Sketch: Gabrielle H.

Critiques (15 pages) + Character Sketch: Anne

First Chapter Critique: Rachel

First Chapter Critique: @extinctath0n

First Chapter Critique: Hannah

Short Critiques: Anastasia B.

Short Critiques: Jane

Short Critiques: @sorcaron

Short Critiques: @writetoexpress

CONGRATS, EVERYONE!

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To Claim Your Prize…

I’ll be emailing ya’ll today and tomorrow to establish contact. I ask that you respond to me via email (even to just say, “Yes, I want this!”) within 48 hours – otherwise I’ll do another random drawing to give the prize to another contestant. For those of you with sketches, I’ll include instructions about contacting the artist, Laura.

Once again, thanks for entering! You guys are the best!

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Alyssa was born in small town Milton, Florida, but life as a roving military kid soon mellowed her (unintelligibly strong) Southern accent. Wanderlust is in her blood, and she’s always waiting for the wind to change. Stories remain her constant.

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